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That's all she wrote... for now. [Nov. 29th, 2006|08:48 pm]
Tequila Sunset

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And with 54,097 words, the novel Tequila Sunset comes to a close.

I'd like to thank everyone who's read the story along the way - all the comments and encouragement you've given me really helped me make the finish line. Thank you for enjoying reading about Philip, Bastian and Brian as much as I've enjoyed writing about them.

I'm pretty sure there's going to be a sequel someday. I might even write some little shorts and post them up here and there. Who can say?

But for now, this is what we've got. If you've got some comments or questions about the novel as a whole, I'd love to hear them - please reply to this post.

I'm going to be spending a goodly portion of time after the holidays editing Tequila Sunset and Michael's Story ( michael_malone for that story collection, if you missed out on it), and then trying to submit them for publication somewhere. Wish me luck! They're far from complete in their current state, but I'm hopeful.

And most importantly, I learned that if I really push myself, I can put out some quality writing that people will want to read in a month's time. That's a major improvement over the 2 1/2 years it took me to complete Michael's story.




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Name meanings [Nov. 24th, 2006|10:02 pm]
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Philip
Origin Meaning
Greek lover of horses
Traits: The name Philip has several different images: a dashing military man; a stuck-up prince; a wealthy businessman; or a brainy introvert.
Famous people with this name: the biblical disciple Philip; Britain's Prince Phillip; several French and Spanish kings named Philip; detective Philip Marlowe; novelist Philip (Goodbye, Columbus) Roth

PHILIP

Gender: Masculine

Usage: English, Dutch, Biblical

Pronounced: FIL-ip (English), FEE-lip (Dutch)
From the Greek name Φιλιππος (Philippos) which means "friend of horses", composed of the elements φιλος (philos) "friend" and ‘ιππος (hippos) "horse". Saint Philip was an apostle in the New Testament. This was also the name of an early figure in the Christian church spoken of in Acts in the New Testament. The name was borne by five kings of Spain, six kings of France, and five kings of Macedon, including Philip II the father of Alexander the Great.

Sebastian
Origin Meaning
Latin venerated, majestic
Traits: People picture Sebastian as a big, highly intelligent man who is polite and trustworthy.
Famous people with this name: St. Sebastian, third-century martyr; actor Sebastian (Family Affair) Cabot; English runner Sebastian Coe; Sebastian in Shakespeare's plays Twelfth Night, The Tempest; Sebastian (Brideshead Revisited) Flyte

EBASTIAN

Gender: Masculine

Usage: English, German, Polish, Finnish, Romanian

Pronounced: se-BAS-chen (English), se-BAS-tee-an (English), ze-BAHS-tee-ahn (German), se-BAHS-tyahn (Polish) [key]
From the Roman name Sebastianus which meant "from Sebaste" in Latin. Sebaste was the name a town in Asia Minor, its name deriving from Greek σεβαστος (sebastos) "venerable" (a translation of Latin Augustus, the title of the Roman emperors). Saint Sebastian was a 3rd-century Roman soldier martyred by arrows after it was discovered he was a Christian. This was also the name of a king of Portugal who died in a crusade against Morocco.

Brian
Origin Meaning
Irish Gaelic strength, virtue
Traits: Most people think of Brian as an Irish he-man who is smart, athletic, and sociable. Some, though, think Brian is a drab mama's boy.
Famous people with this name: Irish King Brian Boru; actors Brian (Family Affair) Keith, Brian (Cocoon) Dennehy; movies Monty Python's Life of Brian, Brian's Song; football's Brian Piccolo; director Brian (Carlito's Way) De Palma; Canadian Prime Minister Brian Mulroney

BRIAN

Gender: Masculine

Usage: Irish, English

Pronounced: BRIE-an
The meaning of this name is not known for certain but it is possibly related to the Old Celtic element bre meaning "hill", or by extension "high, noble". Brian Boru was an Irish king who thwarted Viking attempts to conquer Ireland in the 11th century. He was victorious in the Battle of Clontarf, but he himself was slain.

Mavis
Origin Meaning
French thrush
Traits: Most people describe Mavis as a tall, heavyset, middle-aged black woman who is nice but boring. Some, though, say Mavis is a wealthy, bossy old maid.
Famous people with this name: novelist Mavis Gallant

MAVIS

Gender: Feminine

Usage: English

Pronounced: MAY-vis
From the name of the type of bird, also called the song thrush, ultimately derived from Old French. In the spring it migrates to Scotland where it is said to be the harbinger of spring.

Melody
Origin Meaning
Greek melody
Traits: People expect Melody to be a tall, thin white woman with long hair who spends a lot of time on her studies.
Famous people with this name: author Melody Beattie; actress Melody (Neverending Story III) Kay; Prince's song "Melody Cool"; Emily Dickinson's Bolts of Melody

MELODY

Gender: Feminine

Usage: English

Pronounced: MEL-ah-dee
Means simply "melody" from the English word, which derives (via Old French and Late Latin) from Greek μελος (melos) "song" combined with αειδω (aeido) "to sing"

Anna
Traits: Most people think of Anna as a big, old-fashioned woman who is quiet and sweet but also strong and determined--a perfect combination for a pioneer.
Famous people with this name: Leo Tolstoy's novel Anna Karenina; Russia's Empress Anna Ivanovna; dancer Anna Pavlova; children's story writer Anna (Black Beauty) Sewell; opera singer Anna Moffo; movie character Anna (The King and I) Leonowens

ANNA

Gender: Feminine

Usage: English, Italian, German, Dutch, Scandinavian, Finnish, Estonian, Greek, Hungarian, Polish, Russian, Czech, Slovak, Bulgarian, Icelandic, Catalan, Breton, Biblical

Other Scripts: Αννα (Greek), Анна (Russian, Bulgarian)

Pronounced: AN-a (English), AHN-nah (Italian, Dutch, Polish), AH-nah (German)
Latinate form of HANNAH. It appears briefly in the New Testament belonging to a prophetess who recognized Jesus as the Messiah
From the Hebrew name חַנָּה (Channah) which meant "favour" or "grace". Hannah was the mother of Samuel the prophet in the Old Testament. The Latin version of this name is Anna.

Tara
Origin Meaning
Irish Gaelic rocky pinnacle
Traits: Tara is described a petite, beautiful, brunette southern belle who is quiet, elegant, and earthy.
Famous people with this name: actress Tara (Sirens) Fitzgerald; Tara, the O'Hara plantation in Gone with the Wind; the mythological Tara, home of ancient Irish kings

TARA (1)

Gender: Feminine

Usage: English

Pronounced: TAHR-a, TER-a Anglicized form of the Irish place name Teamhair, which possibly means "elevated place" in Gaelic. This was the name of the sacred hill near Dublin where the Irish high kings resided. Tara was also used as the name of the O'Hara plantation in the novel and movie 'Gone with the Wind'.

TARA (2)

Gender: Feminine

Usage: Indian, Hindu Mythology
Means "star" in Sanskrit. In Hindu and Buddhist mythology Tara was an astral goddess, the wife of Brihaspati.

Last names:

Philip Daniels
(origin: Heb.) Daniel signifies, the judgment of God, the s added, being a contraction of son--the son of Daniel.

English, North German, Dutch, and Jewish (Ashkenazic): patronymic from the personal name Daniel.

Bastian Graves
1. English: patronymic from Grave - English: occupational name from Middle English greyve ‘steward’, from Old Norse greifi or Low German greve
2. French: topographic name for someone who lived on a patch of gravelly soil, from Old French grave ‘gravel’ (of Celtic origin)

Brian Small
1. English: nickname for a person of slender build or diminutive stature, from Middle English smal ‘thin’, ‘narrow’.
2. Translation of equivalents in other European languages, such as German Klein and Schmal, French Petit.
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Weekly Word count [Nov. 24th, 2006|02:07 pm]
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11/24/06 -

Word count is at 39,365

Only seven days left, eep!
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Soundtrack [Nov. 18th, 2006|01:42 am]
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These are the songs I've found so far that fit the story... I may upload them at some point for your listening pleasure .

1. Boston - More than a Feeling
When I'm tired and thinking cold
I hide in my music, forget the day
And dream of a girl I used to know
I closed my eyes and she slipped away
She slipped away. she slipped away.

Philip and Mavis, obviously (ignore that the song says Marrianne)

2. Moody Blues - Evening: The Sunset
I can see it all
From this great height
I can feel the sun
Slipping out of sight
And the world still goes on
Through the night


3. Pink Floyd- Brain Damage
The lunatic is in my head.
The lunatic is in my head
You raise the blade, you make the change
You re-arrange me 'til I'm sane.
You lock the door
And throw away the key
There's someone in my head but it's not me.

(Whee- getting mindfucked by Morpheus)

4. Pink Floyd- Time
You are young and life is long and there is time to kill today.
And then one day you find ten years have got behind you.
No one told you when to run, you missed the starting gun.

So you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking
Racing around to come up behind you again.
The sun is the same in a relative way but you're older,
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death.

(Philip)

5. Simon and Garfunkel- The Only Living Boy in New York
Hey, I've got nothing to do today but smile.
Da-n-da-da-n-da-da-n-da-da here I am
The only living boy in New York

Half of the time were gone but we don't know where,
And we don't know here.

(Philip)


6. Jewel- You Were Meant For Me
I pick a book up. Turn the sheets down.
Take a deep breath and a good look around
Put on my pjs and hop into bed
I'm half alive but I feel mostly dead
I try and tell myself it'll be all right
I just shouldn't think anymore tonight 'cause
Dreams last for so long
Even after you're gone
I know you love me
And soon I know you will see
You were meant for me
And I was meant for you

(Mavis)

7. The Elected - Not Me
Running in place, retracing the same things.
You do what it takes- erase what the day brings.
And when the knife comes down, you're gonna look around
To see who cut you down. It's not me.

It's not me

(Bastian)

8. Rilo Kiley - Pictures of Success
When you're dead
In hospitals and freeways
When you're dead
In resting homes and clinics
When you're dead
It must be nice to finish
When you're dead

I've had it with you
And Mexico can fucking wait

( Situational, I guess...)

9. Rilo Kiley - A Better Son/Daughter
Sometimes in the morning I am petrified and can't move
awake but cannot open my eyes
and the weight is crushing down on my lungs I know I can't breath
and hope someone will help me this time

(Philip)

10. Azure Ray - Favorite Cities
So it's grey, well so are my favorite cities
And we have, we have all the time in the world here
We'll just stay tucked in the shade and our eyes they can't be blinded
We'll just stay tucked in the shade
So it's grey, well so are my favorite cities
And the sky on such a memorable night
And we have, we have all the time in the world here
That's a lie, that's a lie...

(Bastian)

11. Margot and the Nuclear So & Sos - Quiet as a Mouse
When I woke I was alive in somebody's room
I felt life and love and hope infested my bones

Wake up you've got a lot of things to do
Wake up the sun is rising without you

When I woke my body was dying all over the floor
I felt apathy and hate infested my bones

Wake up you've got a lot of things to do
Wake up the sun is rising without you

(Philip)

12. Neva Dinova - Did You Disappoint your God?
What's it like when you die
Do you live on in
memories?
If you can I want to try
I didn't get
nothing done in this life
I need to try, I need to try.

(Bastian thinking about Alexi)

13. The Who- I'm Free
I'M FREE-I'm free,
And freedom tastes of reality,
I'm free-I'm free,
AN' I'm waiting for you to follow me.

(Philip)
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Weekly word count [Nov. 17th, 2006|12:11 am]
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Just finished week two

11/17/2006

Wordcount: 29,505

Days remaining - 15
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Table of Contents [Nov. 13th, 2006|02:06 am]
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Prologue

1.Our Story Begins with Philip
2. Bastian's Sunday
3. P1 Server Problems
4. Footprints in the Sand
5.Sever Split?
6. In the Hospital, October 14, 2006
7. Petabytes
8. DMV
9. The Good News
10.Brian
11.Mother
12. December 19th, 2006
13.Welcome Home
14. Hello, Kitty...
15. Playing Chess
16. Rain
17. Mecha Warrior
18. Leaving
19. Is it Wednesday (part one)?
20. Is it Wednesday (part two)?
21. April 13, 2008
22.Waiting...
23.Want a Ride?
24. The River
25.Floating
26. Questions
27. The Only Living Boy
28. September 18, 2038
29. Super Sunshine
30. Sarsaparilla
31. Liberty
32. The Board Meeting
33. May 18th, 2063
34. The Applicant
35. King of Steaks
36. Sisters
37. Supplement
38. Toynbee Tile
39. Morpheus
40. Bad News
41. Unfair
42. Reflections (part one)
43. Reflections (part two)
44. Twitch
45. The Only Living Boy (reprise)
46. Accountability
47.Family Time
48. Waking Up
49. For Philip
50. The News
51. Philip is Bored
52. Bastian's Wonderful Life
53. A Merry Little Christmas
54. The Christmas Miracle
55. A Graves Family Christmas
56. On the Way to Mexico

Epilogue
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Weekly Wordcount [Nov. 8th, 2006|02:26 pm]
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11/08 - I have been writing for one week.

Current wordcount is 15,824


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Glossary [Nov. 8th, 2006|02:22 pm]
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Corporate housing- paid for by your employer, usually good quality, or at least clean and safe

Dreamer- one who dreams, usually as a service to others

Dreamscape- the world of dreams

Dreamstation - the popular console game that allows you to play in your sleep, alone or with others Titles include Mecha Warrior Battlescape and Super Sunshine Party.

Government housing- the crappy housing the government pays for, when you don't have a job that springs for your living arrangements, or when you are too poor to pay for your own. It's generally cramped, crappy, and not-too-safe. An estimated 85% of the population lives in, or has lived in, government housing.

Lucid- being aware within in the Dreamscape

Morpheus- a corporation that specializes in providing dream-time vacations for rich folks that can afford them

Organic- can refer to naturally grown food and meat (which is very expensive!) , or to the organic component of something. For example, Philip is the organic component of the P1 server.

Sonic Shower - a waterless 'shower' that cleans the body

Synthetic- a lot of foodstuffs and materials are artificially manufactured or grown. These tend to be poorer quality

Temporary Love- a euphemism for purchasing a companion for the night; legal prostitution

Unplugged - uncool, lame

More things will be added to this post as I think of them.
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Characters [Nov. 8th, 2006|02:15 pm]
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Major Characters

lastbastian and p1dreamer

Check their journals for all the info you need on them!

Secondary Characters:

Mavis Daniels - Philip's wife. Mavis was raised Catholic, and she feels guilt over some of her bad feelings towards Philip and their marriage. She feels guilty (on and off) for leaving him in the care of Morpheus.

Tara Ranier- Bastian's sister (one of the twins). She reacted to Alexi's death by becoming a Christian. Tara married Richard Ranier, and they had a son together who is now three. They named him Alexi , but they call him Lex.

Anna Graves- Bastian's sister (one of the twins). She is very artistic, and free-spirited. She has anti-corporate views that cause her to clash with Bastian sometimes

Brian Small- Night security at the Morpheus dreamlab where the P1 server is hosted. Brian is 26 and lives with his alcoholic mother. He frequently escapes from reality while sleeping by playing his Dreamstation. His favorite game is Mecha Warrior Battlescape, though he's developing a fondness for Super Sunshine Party thanks to Melody.

The Brontosaurus- Technically a figment of Philip's imagination, the brontosaur appears in his dreams as a wise friend and tell-it-like-it-is kinda guy. He's aware of the fact that he's both fictional and extinct.

Melody - dream prep girl, who has trouble sleeping but likes to play Dreamstation. Her favorite game is Super Sunshine Party. She likes Brian.


Tertiary Characters

Elana Graves- Bastian's mother. She suffers from Alzheimer's and is a resident of the Green Grace nursing home. She was a single parent who raised her children well, and worked long hours in the carbon factory before her illness.

Richard Ranier- Bastian's brother-in-law. Married to Tara. A politician and a church leader, a good guy.

Lex Ranier- Smart and active three year old son of Tara and Richard

Alexi Graves- Bastian's older brother who dreamed himself to death some 18 years ago.

Bette Graves-Thompson- Bastian's oldest sister, who lives down south.

Marc Harion- Bastian's direct boss, a no-nonsense kind of guy, but fair.

Brian's mother- an alcoholic who dotes overly much on her only child

Dr. Crenshaw - doctor who gets Mavis to sign Philip over to Morpheus Corporation

Serena Levin - head of the Dreamtime Management division (Bastian's boss's boss), a high-up corporate official.

Carrie- large woman who owns a diner, sympathetic to paying customers

Rachel -Mavis's youngest daughter

Mr. Dobbson- director of Customer Affairs at Morpheus

Mr. Marx- from the Expenditures department of Morpheus. Large, and usually angry.
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Partially friends only - please join [Oct. 30th, 2006|02:44 am]
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Please join the community so you will be able to see all entries. When the time comes, I will be posting my story here under a friends lock. You will only be able to see plot development and incidental posts if you do not join the community. You may also wish to friend the characters' individual journals - p1dreamer and lastbastian , as I will post some character development exercises there.
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